septiNaPoWriMo

Inspired by the prompt, but not following the method:

a paired market stroll
soft turn to the side, i smile
my shirt's a snot rag
sometimes you just don't expect
the many forms that love takes

Had to use that incident…

And I have to thank all the people who contributed prompts. Please ignore the complainers. Also, happy 41st birthday to RFC 1!

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I love being someone’s snotrag.

Comment by Kagerrr — Wed 07 Apr 2010 10:53:51 PM PDT

What a neat poem! I always try to have loads of tissues for my wife, but I can relate. ;-)

Alan With Words

Comment by Alan Summers — Thu 08 Apr 2010 12:24:01 AM PDT

only in love do we offer ourselves so freely… now thaz the kinda love we all wanna experience at least a dozen times a day… !!! erotic engine

Comment by pieceofpie — Thu 08 Apr 2010 12:53:58 AM PDT

It’s funny fuzzy.

— Thu 08 Apr 2010 02:29:49 AM PDT

This made me “Awww” out loud! I really feel I can relate too. Nothing like the sharing of unflattering bodily functions with the one you love

There is something very concise and clear about that first line. It conjures a vivid image with very few words. Those last lines are great as well. Truer words never spoken. Love this.

Comment by ericahawleyscime — Thu 08 Apr 2010 03:37:24 AM PDT

Awww Jason….you blew it!

Comment by Rallentanda — Thu 08 Apr 2010 05:20:07 AM PDT

Thank you! As soon as I saw the prompt, I knew what incident I had to use… My wife still apologizes. Needlessly. It was too cute…

Comment by Jason Riedy — Sat 10 Apr 2010 09:22:38 PM PDT

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